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Re: Fan Stories

Post by Mercedes on Thu Feb 25, 2010 7:51 pm

Cross, you crazy dude.

Can anyone guess how many pages I have written?
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Post by Javier Cross on Thu Feb 25, 2010 7:54 pm

About a dozen pages?

A Yuri[Girl-On-Girl] Make-out scene could workas long as it doesn't come out contrieved, or worse, that is! and besides, who knows?
You might be killing a lot of the right birds with the right stone, if you do it well.

And i found a fic that Thalia may or may not like[but Annabeth, if either of the two are out there, not so much!]

http://ptdahood.deviantart.com/art/Grace-141332264

Its actually rather good, really.

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Post by Mercedes on Sun Mar 14, 2010 8:10 am

Okay...? ANd no, I have written 117 pages.
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Post by Javier Cross on Sun Mar 14, 2010 2:20 pm

I thought the series could use some girl/girl makeout scenes. Razz

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Post by Mercedes on Sun Mar 14, 2010 2:21 pm

Mine?
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Post by Javier Cross on Sun Mar 14, 2010 2:28 pm

Of course, Mercedes.
Do you have bi-sexuals on your cast?

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Post by Mercedes on Sun Mar 14, 2010 2:29 pm

Um... One, but its a guy...
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Post by Javier Cross on Sun Mar 14, 2010 2:39 pm

Is it alright to also have a female bi, for good measure, on the cast?

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Post by Mercedes on Sun Mar 14, 2010 2:42 pm

Why do you want me to have a bi in my book?
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Post by Javier Cross on Sun Mar 14, 2010 2:49 pm

I would like to know how to deal with developing Bi-sexuals among the cast, correctly, if it helps.

That, and i want to know how well you can do girl-on-girl makeout scenes[and maybe some guy-on-guy, as well, since there's bi-girls who find bi-guys attractive!]

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Post by Mercedes on Sun Mar 14, 2010 3:07 pm

Why though?
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Post by Javier Cross on Sun Mar 14, 2010 3:20 pm

You mean on the Yuri makeout session or two?
I wanted to know if you can avoid making it come out contrived or worse, in case you may need to deal with guy-on-guy make-out scenes, later on.

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Post by Mercedes on Tue Mar 16, 2010 5:04 pm

I am not doing that! I do not want to offend anyone.
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Post by Javier Cross on Tue Mar 16, 2010 5:49 pm

I won't be offended by guy-on-guy makeouts, but how could other people be offended by girl-on-girl makeouts?

Spoiler:
http://zory22.livejournal.com/5325.html

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Post by Mercedes on Tue Apr 13, 2010 7:38 pm

I no people can be sensitive and I do not want to offend anyone. Not just u.
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Post by Javier Cross on Wed Apr 14, 2010 6:07 pm

*sigh* You win, Mercedes.

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Post by Mercedes on Wed Apr 21, 2010 12:49 pm

Wink I normally do... Us German automobiles... jk, lol...
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Post by Javier Cross on Wed Apr 21, 2010 5:49 pm

So i just read that Yaoi Fic, and although i'm still hetro, i still find it interesting.

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Post by Mercedes on Thu Apr 22, 2010 12:39 pm

*sigh* Cool
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Post by Javier Cross on Thu Apr 22, 2010 4:17 pm

Did you go to livejournal to read worthwhile Yaoi, as well?
How could Yuri be more frowned on than Yaoi, again?

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Post by Mercedes on Fri Apr 30, 2010 11:06 am

Huh?

After much intermal debate....

...Do you want me to post some more of my book?
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Post by Javier Cross on Fri Apr 30, 2010 7:45 pm

Mercedes wrote:Huh?

After much internal debate....

...Do you want me to post some more of my book?

Please post more of your novel in there, then.

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Post by Mercedes on Sun May 16, 2010 1:02 pm

A street light flickered over my head and I stepped forward.

“Let them go, Gregori.”

He froze and turned around staring at me. I looked at his lips, deliberately looking away from his eyes.

“How do you-,” he began and was promptly interrupted by Green-eyes.

“Who are you?” she asked turning away from the person she had been examining. Her heels made soft taps that echoed through the alley as she walked towards me.

The eyes of my team had become black with the film that Gregori’s victims got.

“I am me.”

“No shit, Sherlock,” she said sarcastically as she glared at me.

“My name is Layla. The only surviving Black Knight and you are compelling my friends,” I replied pointing my finger at Gregori and then at my frozen team.

Gregori looked at me and then narrowed his eyes.

“’Black Knight’? Wow. Did the circus come into town yet? I think you should join,” snorted the Green-eyed woman. The others joined in her laughing at me, except for Gregori.

“Wait… I think I have heard of you… aren’t you some sort of hybrid? Bitten by both Vampire and Zombie?” asked Gregori, face dead serious.

“That’s impossib-” started Green-eyes, annoyed.

“And aren’t you a Royal born and raised in Russia? Duh.” I growled and nodded my head towards Larry and the others. “Let them go from your compulsion.” Green eyes walked away, as if about to leave.

“Wait. So you are telling me that you do exist. Then, you must know Julia.”

That seemed to get the Green-eyed chick’s attention quickly. She whirled in a circle and faced us again.

“Gregori this is not a joke-,” her voice was hoarse, as if the name brought up a painful memory.

“Addy, I know Regina told you to find her.” He pointed his finger at me and continued, “I think that she can lead us to Julia.”

“Wait… who?” I asked, completely confused. “Is she a Zombie?”

Addy, the green-eyed girl, looked at Gregori. “See? There is no way she knows her. And if she was the ‘only Black Knight’- whatever the hell that is- she wouldn’t be just standing there.”

I raised my eyebrows. My instinct was telling me to drive her into the wall and show her who she is dealing with but my gut told me to wait until she was least expecting it. I listen to my gut better than my instinct. Usually.



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Post by Javier Cross on Sun May 16, 2010 1:54 pm

So that's the black knight.

Is there more?

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Post by Mercedes on Sat May 22, 2010 4:48 pm

only 191 pages more. Do you want me to post more? I can't post all of it... I want some to be a surprise..
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