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Post by Princess Liss Dragomir on Fri Jan 01, 2010 7:51 pm

Mercedes wrote:This is where all those who wish to write books can get ideas for names (etc.) for characters in their books and if they want exerpts. If they put up exerpts please do not take their ideas for your own!!! That's plagerizing (i no i didn't spell that correctly but u no wat i mean). Be warned that this could happen so I don't reccomend that you post exerpts...

Can anyone start naming some names? Fist or last or both! Very Happy

Well the people gave the other person the idea, so the person can basically use it whatever way they want to. If you didn't want your idea taken, then you should keep your mouth or typer silent.
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Post by Mercedes on Fri Jan 01, 2010 8:56 pm

um. did I say to give ideas? I meant ideas for NAMES and other stuff like that. Suspect
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Post by Javier Cross on Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:08 am

Princess Liss Dragomir wrote:hi

Hello, Angel. Embarassed

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Post by Mercedes on Sun Jan 03, 2010 1:34 pm

Lol. You are a bit late, cross. She left my house yesterday.
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Post by Rozamarie on Mon Jan 04, 2010 3:09 pm

Mercedes, why'd you take down your story?
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Post by Javier Cross on Mon Jan 04, 2010 11:38 pm

Is there Yuri stuff in the storyline? Razz

I don't know why, but Yuri stuff might be nice to read, every once in a while. Embarassed

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Post by Mercedes on Mon Jan 18, 2010 8:17 am

Ha-ha. I don't think so. Wouldn't that be plagerizing? Anyway,Hobbit I am adding on more to it so oil will post.it in the next post. I am adding a new character and it will be from her perspective in the beginning. Her name is Layla.
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Post by Mercedes on Mon Jan 18, 2010 8:34 am

This scene is the prologue and is set in 1791.



The scream rips through the night, waking me immediately. I hear banging and other noises downstairs.

I scramble out of bed.

Highwaymen, I think to myself, get to the closet.

I make my way through the messy room to the corner by the bookshelf and trip over my trunk. A loud thud is sounded and the gnawing noises cease.

The next thing I know my door is knocked down and a bloody thing is snarling in my face. The rotted corpse has blood dripping from his teeth; the wretched stench of death from his breath is steaming in my nose. I stand up, terrified in complete shock and horror.

The thing lunges at me and tries to bite at my flesh. I try to scream and shield my face, but the thing just bites at my hands and arms. Its teeth draw blood.

Then the unmistakable sound of sword sliding from the sheath comes from behind the beast. It shrieks in pain and turns its attention to a woman. She’s wearing all black. A dress with a slit up her thigh, a high neck and no sleeves. And the sword’s belt on her waist made her the picturesque image of unholy. The look on her face when the beast turned on her was a mixture of hatred and rage that shone in the moonlight.

‘Run! Now! Get out of here!’ she screams.

I regain awareness and run to the other side of the room, to the bathroom, all the while still very aware of the fight from the grunts. I cut through the bathroom to my cousin’s room and discoverer her body. Her face is frozen in pain and terror. Her chest has a hole in it. Her heart has been ripped out.

I stop in my tracks, a scream- my scream – beginning to rise in my throat when a hand clamps over my mouth.

‘Don’t scream,’ the woman sooths. She pulls me into a protective embrace. She removed the hand on my mouth to stroke my hair, ‘It will be alright, child. Everything will be just fine.’

She then examines my scratches and bites. I am already becoming nauseous.

While she does this, my eyes drift across the hall to my Aunt and Uncles’ room. The door is open. One bloody, dismembered body lies on the floor.
My eyes widen and travel down the stairs. I see three more bodies, two of which are already mostly dust. One I recognize as my Uncle. There are others dressed in black, most were cleaning knives and swords. All of them had their backs turned.
She nuzzles her head in my neck. She bites me.

The scream escapes.






Chapter One:







My eyes opened.

I felt my pupils dilate, adjusting to the darkness. My violet eyes scanned my room, checking for any immediate threat and found none.

Quietly I turned over in bed and felt for the drawer on my nightstand. I opened it, stuck my hand into it, slipped out of the warm covers and kneeled on the cold hardwood floors. The boards let out a quiet groan and I breathed in, yanking my hand back from the drawer. I felt the cool metal and leather on my skin. Wrapping my fingers around it, I brought it out of the drawer.

Tap. Tap.

There it was again. I glanced at my clock. ‘11:35 PM,’ it told me. No Vamp in their right mind would wake up this early.

Tap, tap.

It was louder this time; more agitated. I took the gun from the holster, unlocked the safety and loaded the gun, quickly and quietly.

Tap, tap… Bang!

I looked up startled and stood. My bare feet found their way to the wall, and I pressed my back to it. I pointed the barrel at the floor and made my way to the front door.

Bang, bang, bang!

I reached the door to my dorm and called, “Who’s there?”


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I cut out a lot of the first chapter to leave some suspence... Hehehe...

...Chapter 2 is the first chapter of Dark Hearts.

Alsooo...
1) I changed my pen name to Morgan Gant.
2) Layla looks like Rozamarie's [Hobbit's] avatar


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Post by Javier Cross on Mon Jan 18, 2010 9:50 am

So whatever became of the Prologue's narrator?

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Post by Mercedes on Mon Jan 18, 2010 1:38 pm

Layla? You find a little about that in chapter 1. The rest is told throughout the story.
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Post by Javier Cross on Sat Jan 30, 2010 12:52 am

Should i write about Mina writing a Lemon for Cross and Bella, without either of them realizing it, until later on?

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Post by Mercedes on Sun Jan 31, 2010 3:30 pm

Shocked

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Uhhh... I don't care.... It's up to you...

--why? Suspect
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Post by Javier Cross on Mon Feb 01, 2010 2:19 pm

Because its a habit Mina tends to do, to write a Lemon scene, really.

So i plan to write about her, writing an erotic lemon scene.

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Post by Mercedes on Mon Feb 01, 2010 2:23 pm

Uh.. Okay...?
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Post by Javier Cross on Tue Feb 02, 2010 9:10 pm

The problem, is that i am scared of fouling up a Lemon scene!

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Post by Mercedes on Wed Feb 03, 2010 6:32 pm

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Post by Javier Cross on Wed Feb 03, 2010 7:37 pm

Where can i get lessons for doing a Lemon scene, right?

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Post by Mercedes on Mon Feb 08, 2010 6:59 pm

In any adult romance novel...?

Out of curiosity- why are u asking me?
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Post by Javier Cross on Mon Feb 08, 2010 7:12 pm

Because i'd rather not read Harlequins, if i have to read adult novels.

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Post by Mercedes on Mon Feb 08, 2010 7:16 pm

WHY ARE YOU ASKING ME? confused
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Post by Javier Cross on Mon Feb 08, 2010 7:34 pm

Because i thought you knew how to do Yuri Lemons!

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Post by Mercedes on Wed Feb 10, 2010 3:15 pm

What are you talking about? Yuri is a VA character. If I used him in my book It would be plagiarism.
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Post by Javier Cross on Wed Feb 10, 2010 3:29 pm

That's not the Yuri i meant!
I meant Yuri as in Girl-on-Girl!

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Post by Mercedes on Wed Feb 10, 2010 3:41 pm

What? Why would i know - do- that?
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Post by Javier Cross on Wed Feb 10, 2010 4:53 pm

Because i thought you knew how to do Yuri Fictions?
Could you try to do a Yuri Fic, at some point, later on, in life?

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